Hey, your melody and synths sound pretty nice, although it sounds a bit dry here and there (especially the plucked one before the real melody comes in).
Next, I think more frequent use of hits, risers, faders, fx kicks and other (panned) effects could make your track sound more full and energetic, as it now sounds a bit empty here and there, for example in the break between the first and second climax. You could also use vocals to do this in some parts of your track.
Lastly, your kick does not yet sound that sharp and crunchy as in professional tracks; you could for example make it more bright by eq-ing the higher frequencies or by layering it with parts of previous kicks/edited versions of the current kick. Also, while I think the kick's basic character is quite good, the punch needs some work as it does not really 'unleash' the rest of the kick so to speak.
Keep it up and good luck!
